Sunday 19 October 2008

Feedback #2

Well done, this demonstrates focused research and group filming work. Jake, your analysis is more successful in looking at the macro issues in this genre, however overall as a group you are progressing in this area.

Nick - you still need to go back and amend posts where I had previously given you feedback if you want to also aim for a level 4 in planning.

Make sure that you are posting detailed, exact entries on your discussions and concept - not vague comments.

Keep up the good work -just don't cut corners on these planning elements if you want the top mark bracket.

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